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Sources of story ideas

Saturday, August 23rd, 2008

One question I am sure to get anytime I do a reading or happen into a conversation with a non-writer about writing is, “Where do you get your story ideas?” I ask you this: “What was that Montauk Monster that washed up on the Long Island beach?” If you’re a writer of fiction or someone who often sits around and contemplates the “What if?”—much like what I did in junior high school which the teachers labeled daydreaming—you would probably be coming up with all kinds of ideas. Before you know it a short story or a novel would be brewing.

Back around 2000 or 2001 I was watching the Discovery Channel. It was a piece on the 11,000-year-old sabretooth cat remains that had been found in southern California. At the end of the program there was speculation as to whether there was any viable DNA. At the time I lived in Montana. I began thinking about sabretooth cat DNA and Montana wilderness, and how it could make a story. I daydreamed about 800 pound sabretooth cats bringing down elk, grizzly bears, and, of course, man. That’s all I had in mind when I sat down at my laptop and began writing. I had no idea yet how this DNA would be discovered; nor did I know that it would fall into the hands of a wealthy entrepreneur with good intentions, good intentions that go awry. What I did have was faith, faith that once I created the first scene with the first character, that that character would lead to the next character, and the next, and that before I know it I would be sitting on the edge of my seat, eager to find out what was going to happen next. It lead to the publication of my third novel, Smilodon.

Story ideas are everywhere. Here are a couple of examples . . . I’m creating these as I write this blog.

#1 – My wife and I often go out for a walk in the desert not far from our southern Arizona home. In the middle of a dusty jeep track is a thirty-foot saguaro. (pronounced sa-war-o) The track—could be called a road—virtually splits around it. We wonder about this because a saguaro of this size is hundreds of years old; it was likely a youngster when the locally famous Padre Eusebio Francisco Kino (Jesuit Missionary who traveled from Italy to the Americas in 1689) left his footprints in our Pimeria Alta region (today’s southern Arizona and Sonora, Mexico). Maybe he walked around this very cactus when it was knee high. Maybe he created the dirt track that we walk on. Maybe Padre Kino wasn’t the first Jesuit Missionary. Maybe he was preceded by another, Padre Romano, who discovered the lost city of gold and gave up his mission for riches. Maybe Padre Kino also found this lost city, and Padre Romano on his deathbed. Maybe . . .

#2 – True story: our neighbor was driving in Utah this summer when in the dark a bear jumped in front of her. She wasn’t hurt but needless to say the bear didn’t survive and her car required extensive repairs. End of true story. Now the what if. What if after she got out of the car and while waiting for the response to her 911 call, she heard an animal’s cry and with her flashlight spotted two young bear cubs in the trees? What if she comes back later with her son, who she has previously not been getting along well with because of his stand on the environment and animal rights, finds the cubs and brings them home? What if she is a state congresswoman against everything that her son stands for? What if . . . ?

#3 – There is an exit off of I-19 between Green Valley and Tucson, Arizona that goes nowhere. Both directions lead about fifty yards into the desert. What is the story behind this? What could one make up? Could it involve sex, money and death?

The point I’m trying to make is that the ideas are all around us. They just need a daydreamer to turn them into a page-turner, edge-of-your-seat novel.

By the way, if you publish a novel based on any of these three ideas, don’t forget me in the dedication.

James
Novels
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How do you keep up with your characters?

Sunday, August 17th, 2008

What methods do you employ to keep your characters, scenes and events straight in your novels? How do you make sure when you give her green eyes in chapter 24 that you didn’t give her blue eyes in chapter 3, or that you don’t have your villain driving a ’98 Ford Explorer in one scene and a ‘96 Chevy Blazer in another?

 

We all have our methods of tracking the details. What is yours?

 

Here is how I did it in one instance, and how I do it today.

 

The second novel I finished was just over 200,000 words. I know, I know; too long for a new novelist, but there it was. Anyway I had numerous characters in two different times (it’s a time travel), 44 years apart. Some appeared in both times, plus I had back-story that stretched another 30 years. The whole thing spanned from 1914 to 1987. There came a point when I kept losing track of when my characters did things. Lets see, when did Nate first meet Hitler and then saved his life? 1922? As I write this I cannot remember. All I would have to do now, though, is go into the closet, behind the winter coats and the old suits that I know I’ll be able to fit into one day, and my dress Navy whites which I know will come in handy eventually (it’s only been 24 years), push aside three pairs of shoes of a different century, the bowling ball (Wonder where the nearest bowling alley is? Pull it out of the bag to see if my fingers are any fatter; it’s only been 28 years), poke aside the two dead spiders and kill the live one, and then lay my hand on the rolled up and squished, dented and coffee stained time line diagram I created somewhere around 2002.

 

Since the couple of dollars here and the couple of dollars there that I receive on my three published novels barely keep my wife and me in fast food once a month I have to have a day job. That job happens to be as a graphic designer and desktop publisher. At the time that I was working on novel that had Nate and Hitler, Before Anne After, I was in charge of the wide format (poster) printer for my employer. Since I had the skills and the equipment, I built a time line, printed it out on the wide format and tacked it to the wall over my desk at home. It was three and a half feet tall and five feet long. I left enough blank space that I could pencil in new characters. To do this last part I would spread it out on the floor, thus the reason for the coffee stains, or was that wine? Not important.

 

Anyway, that only solved part of my problem. I added to that my Glossary of characters at the end of my working word file. I work in MS Word and use styles and the document map (like an index) to layout my novel. Each of my chapter numbers is listed in the document map. If I want to return to chapter 12 for some reason all I have to do is click on it. One of the very last listings in the document map is “Characters.” Here I list my characters and their attributes. If one of my characters suddenly reveals to the protagonist that he hasn’t gotten over his son dying five years before, I add the son to my list of characters along with a description of his death, and then add the details to his father’s attributes, the character sharing the story. When did Nate meet Hitler and save his life? It was . . . you’ll have to read the book . . . Before Anne After.

 

Other listings (these are virtual chapters in my working novel) are “research” (web links where I’ve done research) and “ideas” (where I quickly write a line or paragraph with a scene idea that I might use later). In the novel I’m currently working on I’ve got a chapter titled, “Irish sayings” because I have an Irish character who likes to quote Proverbs. I have nearly 40 proverbs stored there in case he should suddenly need one. I also have a British character so I’ve got a chapter titled, “British slang.”

 

I hear it already. “I’m not a desktop publisher and figuring out Word is a nightmare.”

 

That’s why I asked for input from other writers. I do admit that the huge time-line was probably a bit of over kill, but at the time it did what I needed it to do. I have since better organized my virtual chapters and am meticulous, almost, at keeping it kept up to date.

 

Again, what is your method of tracking the details? Comment to this post and I’ll share it with all.

James

Novels

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